Saturday, November 15, 2008

Blue (An Erotic Fanfiction)

A/N:

1.) WARNING, GUYS. Some of you might find this offensive. If you are under 18, conservative, or homophobic, please refrain from reading this post. Take this as a warning. Having said that, I will no longer be responsible for your, uh, irresponsibility. AGAIN, ONE LAST WARNING!


2.) This is my first time writing a story so constructive criticisms are most welcome.


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BLUE


It was a dark afternoon. Robert is in his loft, still in his uniform. He is studying in his desk, cluttered with books and notepads. Michael stays in Robert’s loft so that they can study together. But he is lying in Robert’s bed, reading a book. Suddenly, he grabbed a chair, placed it next to Robert, and then sat.

 

“So what do we study about again?”

“Physics and Calculus. We don’t have to fail this, this is our last year in High School.”

“Haha! Excited about college?”

“What do you expect? Besides, we are at the top of the class. So…”

“… So there’s no need to review, brainiac!”

“But still…”

Michael unbuttoned his blue polo.

 

“Say, Robi, can I place this on the chair first? It’s kinda hot.”

“Feel free to do so. Just don’t forget it when you leave.”

 

Michael hung his polo at Robert’s seat. Robert looked at him, somewhat startled.

“… What’s wrong?”

“Uh… No! It’s nothing, Mikee. It’s just… we have to get started.”

“With what?”

“With this, of course. Isn’t it why you were here? To help me, Mr. Second Honours?”

“And thus spoke Mr. Third Honours.”

“You don’t have to rub it into my face.”

“Haha! No hard feelings, ok?”

“So help me review.”

“Alright.”

 

Michael pulled his chair towards Robert’s and he looked closely to what the latter is reading. It was so close that his head was over the other’s shoulder. Robert gulped. Michael pretended he did not hear it, but he was smiling slyly.

 

“Met any girls yet?”

“I’m not you, Mikee. I’m not interested with girls. I’m interested with books.”

“Ok, so let us compare. My number of girls and your number of books…”

“… You’ll beat me there.”

 

Michael just laughed. Robert looked at him, somewhat annoyed. But when he realized that his face was too closed, he looked back to his book. His heart was beating fast.

 

“So you really never met a girl?”

“Well…”

“Liked someone?”

“Of course! I’m still human, after all.”

“Haha, freak! So, what’s the name of the girl?”

 

Silence.

 

“You don’t know her name?”

 

Silence.

 

“Just a name…”

“…Mikee.”

“What?”

“Uh… It’s the name of… the girl, yeah. I think.”

“You’re not even sure?”

 

Michael smiled wider. He pulled his chair further towards Robert’s. There was no distance between them. Robert was petrified. Michael hung his arm on Robert’s shoulder.

 

“So, Mikee’s the girl. Sounds like my nick. Ever made a move?”

“… I’m not good with that.”

“Ok. So let’s make a hypothetical scenario. What will you do if she does this…”

 

Michael turned Robert around so as to face him. The former held the latter’s hair. Robert was obviously startled but Michael “dismissed” the reaction.

 

“So, what will you say?”

“Uh… I… I du… I don’t know… I’ve never been… That close.”

“Even this close?”

Michael neared his face towards Robert’s, still holding his head with one hand. Then he held Robert’s hand with the other.

 

“Mikee? What are you doing?”

“Well, I’m preparing you for what’s to come. But I have doubts… Mikee’s a girl.”

 

Michael locked his lips with Robert’s. Robert did not stop him, but he is not anticipating yet. He closed his eyes while feeling the warmth of their lips. Michael’s hand were rubbing Robert’s thigh. Robert squirmed a little but Michael just held him by the hair. Soon, their lips were fighting. Michael’s hand was ascending to Robert’s chest. Robert suddenly hugged him as if he was commanding the other to get even closer.

 

Even with Robert’s polo on, Michael’s hand searched for Robert’s nipple. Now, both of his hands were roaming every area of the other’s chest. With no sign yet of an erect nipple, Michael tried to unbutton Robert’s blue polo, while his lips descend to Robert’s neck. Robert moaned. Michael then threw Robert’s polo and his hand went inside the other’s shirt. Michael’s hands roamed Robert’s chest. He played with Robert’s nipples. Robert’s moans grew stronger. Michael was removing Robert’s shirt. Robert obliged and assisted him. Michael’s hands now roam to Robert’s crotch.

 

Robert held Michael’s head and kissed him. He was shocked when Michael tried to put his tongue into his mouth. He doesn’t know what to do. Their tongues parried. Michael’s hand found Robert’s hard-on and rubbed it even if they’re still wearing pants.

 

Robert can’t think straight right now. He removed Michael’s shirt. When his hands are to touch Michael’s chest, Michael suddenly pulled him to the bed. Robert was under Michael. They kissed again, more passionately. Michael was removing Robert’s white pants while Robert is playing with Michael’s nipples. Michael kissed Robert’s neck. The air is filled with moans. Michael’s lips descend as he successfully removes Robert’s pants. He sucked Robert’s left nipple while he teased the right.

 

Michael trailed kisses downwards. When he reached Robert’s briefs, he licked it hungrily from where his balls were to where the tip was. Robert’s moans grew even louder. He held Michael’s head, while Michael was pulling down Robert’s briefs.

 

Michael licked Robert’s manhood. He squirmed. Michael cupped his balls while taking his manhood into his mouth. He sucked Robert’s hard-on as if he was a professional. Robert thrust his hips upward, begging for more. Michael continued to such every length of it while Robert’s grip on his hair intensified. Robert thrust his hip further and his moans were faster. Michael knew what was it so he gave Robert a hand job while licking his balls. Robert gave out a loud moan while cumming. Michael licked every juice, effectively swallowing them.

 

Robert grew tired. He was catching his breath when Michael crawled up and kissed him. Robert hugged him while Michael removed his briefs. He drew both Robert’s legs close using his knees and at the very narrow opening of Robert’s legs, he forced his manhood in. Robert twitched in an unexplainable feeling. Michael inserted his manhood; in and out, faster and faster. Robert kissed Michael more passionately. Michael squired out over Robert’s legs. They were breathing heavily.

 

“I like you, Mikee.”

“I know, Robi, right from the start.”

 

Then they kissed again.

 

Early morning, Michael’s mobile phone rang. He woke up and he saw Robert sleeping like an angel. He answered the call.

 

“Yes? Oh, Gerald… Yes… Ok, ok… See you later… It’s a date then… Yes… I love you, too…”

 

Then he turned his phone off, got up, took a bath, dressed then walked away. While Robert is still in his sleep, smiling, oblivious to what’s happening.

12 comments:

  1. kaya nga erotic fiction, ehh... T_T kayo talaga...

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  2. dapat sa fictionpress.net mo yan nilagay para mas madaming makabasa. XD

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  3. im not yet prepared for a larger audience. besides, di naman talaga ako writer. ^^

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  4. and do you think people n fictionpress are REAL writers? or at ff.net? seriously...

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  5. ok. you win, i lose. ok, i'll do that next time. wahaha!

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  6. needs more foreplay probably. Check grammar. I saw a few lapses. It kind of lacked something. I just can't pinpoint what...

    I got it. The ending was so rushed. I mean you were building up a lot emotions in the beginning but then in the near end... where did it all go?

    Just good constructive criticism.

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  7. that's what i call comment! salamat! ^^ i'll consider those things next time, if there is a next time. lol!

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  8. hmm. more foreplay. *grabeng suggestion to*, dapat intense hehe.

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  9. i'll write another one of these if i have read enough. di pa ako sanay magsulat ng ganito. nanghihina pa ako if you know what i mean...

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  10. i dunno what you mean. hehe. keep it up anyway!

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